- #1
Maybe read the first 5 chapters and then stop!This story had good build up, a built world, and promising characters, but shortly after you were shown a glimpse of what it could be, it quickly turns south. Not sure which would be worse. Reading this all the way through again or drinking a Pan Galactic Gargle Blaster (LOOK IT UP!). Grammatical problems, paragraph issues, word play that doesn't make sense when translated into English...I kept waiting for it to get better. I really did! To the point where I was reading it long past the point that I could tolerate it, but except for a few brief moments of good ideas from the author I finally had to pronounce this story dead. I read until the 42nd chapter just for the sake of reference, but I won't be reading this again, nor will I come back. Sorry author & translator.