Reincarnated Villainous Noble – The Story Changed When I Committed S**cide – Chapter v112 Discussion

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I made chatgpt translate up to chapter 40 and while the start is very good and the general concept of the protagonist is interesting.

The story eventually drags on too long on unimportant aspects and the story seem to be going down the yandere/menhera harem route with a plot full of misunderstandings.

The author is too conservative with giving the readers information on the MC's past lives, which would be fine if the payoff was worth it but it never is. We literally find out one character betrayed him in 2 lives in a row while he was cowering for his life and the payoff is that she misunderstood his intentions and now has a yandere one-sided love for him. The MC could've easily nipped this at the bud but because of plot he just doesn't do anything.

Overall it just feels so half-assed, it never goes for the full effect. I think one of the major aspect that set me off is him making a group with an adventurer, you'd think that with all he's been through he would want to consolidate power with just himself but instead it seems like everything he does now also rely on the strength of his female friend who's conveniently in love with him wow.

Honestly, I don't know what I expected from this, I guess I just wanted something more than basic bit*h mellow drama.
 
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