- #1
The arcs and the storylines are a bit silly, with a very messy writing style; childish and repetitive system/MC interactions. Same story in different arcs, just surrounded in different scenarios - ice cold ML suddenly felt the MC was cute and started falling for her, paving way for her - she completes her task way too easily! most of the times, she doesn't even have to make an effort besides being cute, and the task is completed... There is no tension in any story so far. Spoiler
Only 4% of the ML's soul has been captured, does one have to suffer another 96 arcs before the story comes to an end!???
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