I Was Rejected by the Main Character in a Romantic Fantasy Chapter -- Discussion

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It was an enjoyable read. Was it bad? No. Was it good? Also, no. However, it was enjoyable, to say the least. The story doesn't have that much depth to it. Like, it doesn't have a good identity, but other than a romance with a sprinkle of fantasy. It doesn't know what it wants to be as of right now. It also had pacing issues, really bad pacing issue (not exaggerating.) The author fails to execute a good climax on each arc, and the build-up on each of them is disappointing.

For the characters, it's still quite early on, so I can't say for sure but there's at least some sort of depth on the main cast. But hey, the women are interesting here. The novel was heavily carried IMO by the Spoiler

First Princess

[collapse] The characters are the only saving grace of this novel.

Do I recommend it? No. But should you give it a try? Go. This novel will not be for everyone.
 
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