- #1
It’s not a bad story overall. Some interesting characters and an ok MC setup. But it’s one of those infuriating relationship side stories. The MC has ZERO game. He’s supposed to be a 30 year old in a 20 year old body. There is no chance that’s this is how a real person would act. And that keeps jarring me and pulling me out of the story. And that earns it just a three star review. If there was a more realistic relationship between the main two characters it would be close to a five. I’ll check back on future chapters, but I don’t have much hope.