BJ Villainess Chapter Completed Discussion

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Not really my favourite but I can't deny that this is very good. Although there are a few things that somewhat seem like forced, but overall I still can understand it to some extent. And I'm really glad that the endgame ML is:

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Clyde, second from the left

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Because in fact, amongst all the MLs, he's the only one who's less tr*shy, less scummy and less forceful. I also like their chemistry from enemies > rivals > partners > lovers. Unlike the others, he doesn't force the FL to comply with what he wants, instead he helps her from behind and struggles to give her the freedom she wants.

This is quite a good concept and although there are some places that need a better execution, I'm quite satisfied with the plot, world building and story. Not going to reread it, though.
 
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