BJ Villainess Chapter -- Discussion

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It's an enjoyable read when compared to past villainess novels I've read. I disagree with the other reviews on the MLs switching up because she's changed. It's not a sudden 180 degree switch-up in interest; it's subtle and makes sense. One male lead hates her even more for a considerable part of the story AFTER she changes and another one only gains interest in the first place because of his job.

Her family moments are cute and she doesn't seem "unprepared" when encountering dungeons. However, the only dungeon arc I've completely read is the first one so I don't know how the rest match up. But the settings of the first dungeon make sense in limiting her.

Spoilers underneath this line:

One critique I do have with the story is about what her main objective is for completing the broadcast's overall mission. The author seems to sprinkle in information on why something happens only when it is relevant so it feels like a cop out or an excuse on why the protagonist doesn't do something. Like she wants the key to paradise but only one key is available each month? I don't see much of the plot going towards this important development.

Another critique is that she is a bit of a Mary Sue. I was a little disappointed when the novel made it so that animals hated the original Theresa but now the magic animals love the changed Theresa. There was a valid explanation for it but it still felt like an excuse for the protagonist to get a power-up.

End of spoilers.

It's a great read though and I like it a lot. The protagonist is fun and I find her likable.
 
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