- #1
One star for good translation and another for the author actually completing the novel.I love salted fish stories and don't mind slow-paced, slice-of-life novels, but this was not it.
- The system was incredibly s*upid and annoying. It wanted sugar, but for some reason didn't understand sugar didn't fall from the sky out of nowhere. So it kept forcing the MC to interact with ML without really considering that it'd be super weird for MC to act that kind of all-knowing, all-caring towards the ML when those two were basically strangers. Calling itself love system and not knowing how romance works is ridiculous.
- MC characterisation was beyond salted fish. She didn't want to do anything to the point I started to doubt why should I care. At work, for which she'd be paid, she didn't want to put in the effort. For system missions, which were arguably the easiest and fastest way to earn money, she was too lazy. So she was not going to do anything and would keep worry about her father and wish he would wake up? Because the author wrote her to be this way, the plot only moved along when the system forced something to happen, which again would make the system incredibly annoying.
- Third and last point, I just didn't like the overall pick-me tone of the story that because the MC was lazy and idle, wouldn't put any effort or spare a thought for anything, she appeared cool and likeable. That because she was not like everyone else, she was special. I feel bad for the canon fodders who were actually trying, who did and felt things because they were human. I guess the author was trying for comedy, but it didn't work for me at all.