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FL's character is too unrealistic to work so the plot bends for the her rather than she having Any motivation to do anything. Seems like she has depression but is masking it as "laziness" because she doesn't have any reaction to anything except when crying to her father to wake up but even then, she doesn't even have the motivation to make money? At one point she asks the system to look for someone else, um why? Aren't you getting money for treatment? She is getting paid to be on the show but doesn't contribute? What is this mindset when trying to earn money to save your father?
I think the author feels that being indifferent and not having emotional fluctuations is very cool so even in situations where it makes sense for the FL to show emotions even if it's for the readers she just be like, "I'm too lazy" or " I don't care " or she'll forget about it.
It's okay if his happens a few time that's the entire premise.
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