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Can't believe I would be this annoyed to a novel, to the point I would be making account just to review, even tho I have been in this site for 7+ years.The novel start out great, as tragedy happen to him, the MC became traumatized and depressed, as I expect from 15 years old. But as I progress to the chapter, there is no character development at all, even tho he got support from his surrounding. At times, he get out from his darkness, but later he get in again, yep just like turtle. Well, what I do expect from japanese MC.And Harem! If I realized that there is harem tag in this novel before I start reading, I would not read this novel, so that mistake on my part. Well that besides the point, the point is I don't even know if this could be called harem anymore. There is no progress even with the first female lead, yep he became turtle again. Again, what do I expect from japanese MC. The MC thought that by avoiding the female lead, everything would be fine, but in fact it just torturing both of them. Yeah, you can defend him by saying, "He is traumatized, depressed, yada yada", but for how long he gonna keep being traumatized? Actually there is a lot of moment where the author can make the MC free from them all and keep the novel still being good. But no, the Authour choose to stick close with the Title.Also, I want to talk about 'Spice'. Spice is important in novel as it is in food. Spice is what makes us addicted to it. But, too much Spice is not good either, especially on slow-paced novel like this. Yeah as I progress, the Author keep throwing spice in, even tho it's progress slowly and its the same kind of spice that he keep throwing. It's make me had enough even tho I not on the last translated chapter yet. And those POV just keep getting longer and longer that it's slow down the story even further.It's not like I hate japanese novel. Actually the idea is great, but the execution is bad, so so badd.