The Darkness Was Comfortable for Me Chapter 223 Discussion

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It has it's unique system of magic which is pretty good and the concept of live broadcasting isekai is fun. It's good enough for grabbing early attention for any successful novel. So it's good initially for at least 60 chapters.

After that he started to add cliche of isekai heroine but it is tolerable and we learn new things about world or magic system, so it keeps interesting. But on chapter 102 he did the obvious which everyone was even warning him in comments to stop. It's so disgusting cliche I hate it.

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He was given a choice between resurrecting his childhood friend or saving his isekai girlfriend. It was even so sloppy because the MC even has the means to save her. But apparently God (which is just author insert) apparently forced that if he did that than I won't give you resurrect item. There was no real reason why God wouldn't give him that except forcing this cliche. I hate it.

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If he had focused on these new elements and how they affect his life, it would be easily be a 3 for me. And if author somehow made these concepts tied to plot in meaningful way it would have been great 4-5 novel. But the author lacking his imagination try to use cliches just to keep writing because at least some people who are hooked will still keep reading.

Even I will at least skim some chapters to see what happened till the end but I still hate this novel.

EDIT: Later on although there are new cliche heroines and villains but they are kind of comedic relief and not serious. There is more exploration of the world and his powers which I liked. So it's okay to read but you may want to skip where there are cliche scenes.

Now at the end they are increasing the tension too much and using cliche for this.

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It wouldn't be fair if he left the city before Nanami reached because if feels cliche. It would have been better if there is difference of like 1 month or they are distant but if you first make them close by and also hint that they are just going to meet but then you tore apart then it's cliche. It won't work. Its useless tension which people would rather skip.

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Also the world is so good. Why can't author writer a proper plot? It would be interesting if there were plots explored about how dungeons were established, loved ones treated, some war? Whatever ocerarching plot. The story currently doesn't have any plot. So its just bare.
 
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