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A good story. Some problems with pacing, some problems with convenience and the romantic subplot/current arc feels 'rushed'. In particular:Spoiler
Basically a 'love at first sight' by the heroine. Yes, she was saved by the MC, but seeing the world they are in, being saved and saving others would happen at some point or another. She doesn't seem to fall for the MC for any particular reason beyond 'he doesnt look at me with greedy eyes'. It seems very weak.
That includes the willingness she has shown to basically throw her life away for him. Even tho she does have her own goals.
If they gave the romantic subplot more time it would create some breathing room for it to feel more natural. It is attempted, by them teaming up and the MC learning from her. But by then she already has fallen head over heels for him. A case of rushing to the conclusion that the writer really wanted to write.
[collapse]Seeing it is a big part of the story till now, you might expect me to give a lower rating. But the writer does show that they know 'people'. The bulletin board interactions feel 'real' (and remind me of twatter, sadly). And I believe the writer has it in them to make every character focused and important. I'm willing to give them the benefit of the doubt.That said, it is a by the numbers isekai, even if there is an interesting twist. You will see some tropes float by. If you can overlook them (or even just like them), give this a shot. You might get pleasantly surprised