The Darkness Was Comfortable for Me Chapter 4 Discussion

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I already had a hint on the quality from the synopsis that reeked of amateurism, and low and behold, I was right. The story is filled with chunibyou newbie writing styles. Poor structured writing, lack of impact, unrealistic characters, forced FL love plot, extremely realism breaking main setting, weak minded MC type filler of casual slice of life type of genre in what's supposed to be a serious type story... You know, issues like that.

Though I didn't read far enough to judge whether it'd just be an average jpn novel, or a tr*shy one, with this many problems, I feel like it's safe to assume 2 stars
 
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