- #1
It's a good start to what looks like a cliche but very cute story. The opening is a bit exposition heavy. The author definitely should have found some way other than dumping blocks of text to let us know about the FL and the ML I like the FL's reactions and quirky personality dealing with her situation, thumbs up for that. Finally the writing is well organized and clear, if not beautiful or enthralling.Bottom line there's much worse and thus might well be worth a look