Life as a Tower Maid: Locked up with the Prince Chapter -- Discussion

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The FL's pov is so... noisy

30 Chapters in and there's barely any plot, just incessant non stop thoughts. I'm sorry, but I'm reading novels for their plots, if I want thoughts I can just stare at the ceiling and I can drown in my own thoughts just fine, thanks.

1-3 Chapters of world building and back stories would suffice or at intervals is fine, but 30 Chapters is overkill, bfr. It's just too much.

And I get that the ML is hot. I GET IT, For real, for real. Like it's in every other sentence, it's hard to miss. Please let's move on. Let's discuss about magic, about dark magic, curses, mages, dragons. Anything, other than how hot the ML is. We get it.

The translation is superb though, so props to the translator.
 
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