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Not only is MC insanely good at martial arts but is also a genius doctor and amazing cook. She walks into town to sell some food and ends up saving a master of the school's dean. Her skills were so amazing that the doctor who she helped wanted to immediately hire her and give her half of his shop. Then she ends up cooking at a restaurant who is losing business because a newer restaurant had recently opened up next to it and her cooking was so good that she sold the recipe to the owner. The owner becomes so impressed later that he also wanted her to work for him and promised her a part of his shop as well. Then the person she randomly saved on the mountains, Zhao Wei, is actually a general who she ends up selling wound medicine to. He's so interested in her that he randomly comes around in order to see her despite knowing she's married. The chapter where I stopped is when he appears in front of her in town, says he has something urgent to do with her, throws her on a horse, and instead of getting mad, she gives him a provocative look and races him. And this is all done in front of her husband. Then when she wins the race, she says she forgives his offense because he raced her. Then he calls her Miss Su and she's like, wait, you can't call me that you need to call me Mrs. Hu cause I'm married and it's not appropriate.... so..... when you were flirting on horseback with another single man in front of your husband then it wasn't inappropriate? You've been acting like a single girl this whole time, even the cook at the restaurant thought you were single cause you don't put your hair up in a married woman's bun.... like literally, the author will talk about something and bam, that something happened but in a good way for the MC. She needs money? Bam, here's a doctor shop, restaurant, and rouge shop. Apparently the people she meets are so incompetent at their jobs that they need her to come save them. The doctor is described as being mediocre at medicine yet he managed to open a shop for 10 years and only when he met her can he suddenly not survive and even said without her no one will come to him, a mediocre doctor, and sooner or later he'll need to close down. The restaurant owner is so desperate and on the verge of closing down shop when he met her and suddenly offers to give her a share of his shop as well just so she can cook dishes and train a few chefs for him after only seeing her twice. Heck, she even wanted to rent out the rouge shop next to the doctor's shop so she can sell medicinal meals but the guy quoted such a high price that she went and created a new beauty product and said she'll trade his shop for it and the guy happily gives him the shop with his own two hands. But oh, she'll give him bonuses if he sells her products for her since she's such a kind owner when they haven't even set up a contract yet..... it's like everyone becomes an idiot when they meet her and forgets that they're actually the owner of so and so shop and she's literally a stranger at the moment but they just trust her so much. Also the ML randomly has secret subordinates who appears and send messages and control things behind the scene... yet in the original novel, ML managed to get poisoned and his brother and sister managed to get sold to a brothel, and his mother ends up dead with the original MC being free to go back to the capital and there was no mentioned of these subordinates. I've seen authors write in a way that benefits the MC but the way this author does it feels painful to read.
[collapse]In conclusion, it's an ok read if you don't mind brain-numbing coincidences and everything falling in the lap of a very mary-sue MC. The concept isn't super interesting or different from other novels and other novels have done it much better than this one so far. I only read a few chapters so maybe it gets better but I'm already turned off by what I've read so I'll personally drop it.