- #1
The plot seems interesting, but I started reading it. The chapters are relatively short, the speech and thought process is redundant and repetitive, as if the author is just trying to fill up the chapter.Honestly, if the plot wasn't interesting, I would not want to read this. As for quality of the plot, I am currently on chapter two and will update later.I tried; I really tried to get past chapter two, but I couldn't do it. There are still the redundancies, and then the MC starts to explain his background in a casual conversation where it isn't pertinent. I blame television.Quite frankly, the author is amateur. The background setting is conveniently established so that the storyline has to progress without the MC making any decisions and taking any actions. This could be forgiven, but it is set in unreasonable ways.Overall, this is just really bad writing! It's not the worst I've seen, but it is still pretty bad. I give it two stars, because while it is bad writing the plot is interesting.