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OK, so it started off OK, not great but not terrible.The author managed to keep that up for a little bit, then the story quality itself started having some issues. Then the author started going MPOV (I added the tag for it) and I find multiple POV to be very annoying.Another annoying thing is the author seemed to be padding his word/character count using tricks like listing out each and every crystal obtained and their prices (Not like one price for small/med/large/etc...) He would give prices for them based on amount and purity of the energy, which I think is rational. But, when the author REPEATEDLY lists out a LONG list of crystals and puts different numbers for each with a grand total at the bottom you know they are just padding their word/character count.On the translation, I think this was mostly machine translated. Machine translation is getting better, but it never attributes who says what. Not knowing who exactly is talking gets confusing.I dropped it.