- #1
Well... the writing is good. The first 20 or so chapters are, as well, as clearly evil and corrupt MC works to completely whitewash himself. As others said, though, character development is severely lacking. The daughter isn't that bad of a case. Sure, going from a spoiled and willful brat into a saintlike character is weird, but considering the man she loved not only cheated on her and abandoned her, but told her to die, I think the trauma could be considered enough for a severe and sudden character change.No, the problem is elsewhere. The ML had absolutely no feelings, no reason to like the MC at all and no hints that he was hiding such a thing, nor do we get told that the MC is attracted to ML, or wants to seduce him. Yet, all of a sudden, we get a lovemaking session? The corrupt priest and ML's son is the same, WHY does he like him? The hinted semi-in*estuous couple was actually the only one that sort of made sense! The non-related brother, feeling extremely guilty and regretful for pushing his sister so far, would reasonably overcompensate on showing affection to the point of going too far, there's a cause and effect.Anyway, I read some spoilers to see if it gets better, and...I think I'll move on now. I already don't like what the MC did to the younger twin sister, and it'll apparently get much worse than that, so Im'ma bail.