What To Do If The Heroine Escapes From The Book Chapter 52 Discussion

initial comment is that it's pretty weak mainly because the mc's power is very strong (although almost unexplored), it seemed decent to me until the cult leader shows up because she out of nowhere for no reason starts acting like a woman in a novel of Chinese culture, like for example she is very affected by anything s*xual even though she is old, the fact that she accepts the ab*ses that the MC does without any redress (it gets to the point where she hits him and he even says there is a bit of flirting in it) and without any rancor (his constant "flirting" with her, his taking her hand "innocently", his not denying the relationship they clearly don't have, etc.), the fact that the MC doesn't have to make an effort to cultivation or to "enter" her heart.

Writing Quality - good

Stability of Updates - I don't know

Story Development - poor and without much sense

Character Design - also rotten and with some standard chinese preconceptions

World Background - it doesn't make sense the power of the MC that comes out of the line of power shown in the novel.