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I think this novel should be above 4.1 so I am rating it 5. Interesting premise, from beginning to 2/3 is pretty good. The ending feels a bit dragged, I think the turning point is Spoiler
FL character also seemed to change. Previously she was as what ML described, but when the ML repeated it again in different world, I find that it didn't really match FL anymore. [collapse] ML and FL characters are pretty good. Respectful, hardworking, and care about each other. I like the variety shows in this one, too bad other characters in the show are isolated and don't interact with ML FL outside there. As other reviewer mentioned, the author also keeps repeating how good the physical features of both ML and FL, almost like to complete word count. Somehow it makes it feel more 2D. I can see some resemblance with author's other work (The Former Wife of Invisible Wealthy Man), like some parts of the plot, though I think this novel I am reviewing is more well developed. If you like Spending the Villain's Money to Extend My Life (which I like more than this), you'll probably like the beginning part of this, but mid to end it's not really about the money anymore. Basically, this novel is a good YY novel if you like that type, especially on the beginning part.
when FL met her biological mother. After that it gets a bit boring as it was pretty much smooth sailing. Even with the life threatening thing, I don't feel super interested anymore as I have read the author's other work that was similar.
FL character also seemed to change. Previously she was as what ML described, but when the ML repeated it again in different world, I find that it didn't really match FL anymore. [collapse] ML and FL characters are pretty good. Respectful, hardworking, and care about each other. I like the variety shows in this one, too bad other characters in the show are isolated and don't interact with ML FL outside there. As other reviewer mentioned, the author also keeps repeating how good the physical features of both ML and FL, almost like to complete word count. Somehow it makes it feel more 2D. I can see some resemblance with author's other work (The Former Wife of Invisible Wealthy Man), like some parts of the plot, though I think this novel I am reviewing is more well developed. If you like Spending the Villain's Money to Extend My Life (which I like more than this), you'll probably like the beginning part of this, but mid to end it's not really about the money anymore. Basically, this novel is a good YY novel if you like that type, especially on the beginning part.