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This story could have been written in crayon and I'd feel better about having read it. As it stands the premise itself required a skilled hand that just wasn't there. The MC has no reason whatsoever for her actions. I mean, if someone basically kidnapped you off the street and told you to spend money, no matter what you may have "known", you'd still at least be asking questions. Also, who the hell "wakes up" and immediately goes, "Oh this is that book I read". Not to mention the the "original owner of this body" was so hated by people, but now they keep talking about how she's so pretty? If you want this kind of premise, but with a better plot that makes sense and has decent writing, read Daily Life of a Villain's Mother. You'll still get the "real daughter/switched daughter" part, but the "book" the MC ends up in makes more sense and you won't spend time just skipping paragraphs because you don't care to read the same thing that's just written differently.