- #1
The characters and the plot wasn't that unique, maybe the cuteness and the not-mr-capable-in-all-things MC made it kinda interesting.It has a very basic plot line just like other quick transmigration story, and I actually didn't have any intention to review nor to rate it because my conclusion after reading it was it's not bad but not that good either for me to be invested to the story.There're others with similar concept, but I still don't get why would you need someone to act according to the script and have to finish a certain plot point to "complete the world mission", while you can just let the "real character" act accordingly to "their script" and the world will stay just like how it was supposed to be. For example:Spoiler
At the first world the MC had to be a "slag" (of course, what else) and would ended up starving to death and the mission completed. And there're several plot like a quest that you need to finish in order to complete the mission, for example the MC had to cheated on the ML and sold him out to --idk--evil person (?)
[collapse]So that's basically the script and whoever the actor is, they have to play according to that. You can't change anything, you just have to act your character. My question is, if other characters are play by themselves, why would the "slag shou" have to be played by "actor"? Isn't the world would work the same whoever the actor is because the script is the same? Then why don't you just let the real "slag shou" play his character? Why would you risk an OOC scenario that can change the story line?I hope that makes sense LOL. This review isn't specifically for this story, but also to other stories with similar world building. I know there will be explanation at the end, and it was supposed to be the "surprise" part, but I just can't hold back my thoughts.I'll be back and probably change my review after I finish the story, LOL