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This novel is very irritating. The writing is actually pretty good and the story has potential... However, it fell flat really fast. This series embodies a very simple formula. 1. Orc goes to kingdom and meets a heroine. 2. Orc accidentally does something monumental through multiple ridiculous misunderstandings. 3. He asks heroine out bluntly and gets rejected for various reasons. This formula is in place for 4 arcs. After this, the story FINALLY branches out. Now, we are finally introduced to antagonists. However, since Bash (The orc protagonist) is moronic, he has no clue what is going on. The main plot of the story is built upon monstrous luck and misunderstandings.conclusion: The absurd misunderstandings are a perfect example of lazy/immature writing. I guess it is supposed to be humerus? It was more irritating than endearing in my opinion. However, the most egregious part of this story is the edging... Me and I’m sure many other readers were expecting romance/relationships to form in this story... Well, surprise, surprise as of chapter 78, NOT A SINGLE RELATIONSHIP HAS BEEN FORMED. I’m left wondering why I’m even reading this... TLDR: This story is the embodiment of disappointment.