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Eng - chap 18 and I MLT'ed the rest.3 stars is quite low BUT honestly it was more for me being nitpicky, because over all it's a good story. Not a lot of angst, some face slapping, some fluff and over all it quite a feel good read, with the added bonus of no golden finger or Mary Sue like characteristics.The MLT was one of the better ones I've read, as other reviewers have said, as long as you don't mind pronoun mix up and some random or extra words it's not a difficult read.The romance is slow, or at least the MCs side of things is slow for me personally. But the relationship between MC and ML is sweetSpoiler
1- the whole thing when MCs BFF crosses over into the body of the enemy prince, was not for me, yes it added drama in the right place just as the MC and ML were settling more securely into their relationship but I found it kinda cringy and frustrating to read - more with MCs actions than anything. Like dude obviously the tent was a set up.
2- the bonus stories, where do I even start. I loved, loved the Modern Day MC and ML, and I wish we got more of that especially of what their children who be but it cut off be we got that answer. So that was dissatisfying in a way for me.
But it was the Xu Wenchan and Xie Yunshi that really dissapointed me and honestly I gave up halfway through. It was nothing like I was expecting and made me feel really dissapointed in Xu Wenchen's character development, again this was a personal preference, other might really love the direction it took, but something liked in it for me and I found her to be cowardly. I'm all for female empowerment- I don't need a man to be happy or succeed in life but her actions and choices - I just couldn't wrap my head around when considering main story Achen.[collapse]But over all it put in the time when I was in bed ill and I did enjoy it. It's worth the read and you will enjoy it just don't read if hungry, the mass of food descriptions will send you craving.
Ok my issues are starting here and some are spoilers - I think.
1- the whole thing when MCs BFF crosses over into the body of the enemy prince, was not for me, yes it added drama in the right place just as the MC and ML were settling more securely into their relationship but I found it kinda cringy and frustrating to read - more with MCs actions than anything. Like dude obviously the tent was a set up.
2- the bonus stories, where do I even start. I loved, loved the Modern Day MC and ML, and I wish we got more of that especially of what their children who be but it cut off be we got that answer. So that was dissatisfying in a way for me.
But it was the Xu Wenchan and Xie Yunshi that really dissapointed me and honestly I gave up halfway through. It was nothing like I was expecting and made me feel really dissapointed in Xu Wenchen's character development, again this was a personal preference, other might really love the direction it took, but something liked in it for me and I found her to be cowardly. I'm all for female empowerment- I don't need a man to be happy or succeed in life but her actions and choices - I just couldn't wrap my head around when considering main story Achen.[collapse]But over all it put in the time when I was in bed ill and I did enjoy it. It's worth the read and you will enjoy it just don't read if hungry, the mass of food descriptions will send you craving.
