The Strange Adventure of a Broke Mercenary Chapter 34 Discussion

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It's ok, nothing bad but also nothing special. There is a lot of dialogue and text that doesn't really do anything for story and MC, although reasonably smart, seems to be floormat. He could have avoided a lot of trouble by just speaking up. I can't really see mercenary experience showing up.

This is kind of cheap plot trick to make MC seem better, by having some smart inner dialogue with MC about how things should be done. But if he doesn't try to correct the situation and just goes with it, that makes MC equally s*upid.

Story overall just feels a bit dragged out and has plot holes. I can't say it's bad, but it's not great either.
 
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