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Its pretty good, but the logic is lacking in some areasSpoiler
arc 3 if the pirate truly needed to gte info from MC then he wouldn’t be using potentially life-threatening methods or else the MC would die and the pirates wouldn’t be able to get info on Ramiel’s position. Also pirates leisurely attitude of enjoying the torture is off bc they are desperate for ramiel to decipher the chip. Its not logical right for them to just torture MC for own pleasure. They are super dangerous and a huge threat to the federation and they couldn't have gotten there by being illogical.
[collapse]i do love how the ML is so subservient to MC. I like how BOSS MC is.