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Handicap, as always. For whatever reason, the 3732345th son of coundukekingemperor. Can he just be the 1st son of the king? You know for "novelty" sake.Seemingly omnipotent power. Suits whatever the author needs. It's not fun to read something that just pops out of nowhere, it's fun when you've established parameters, which you can't do if your power is virtually omnipotent.The enemy had little to no gravity. I absolutely hate this typical Japanese dragon killing. Ancient hyper ultra dragon was just dead like that. Take some Korean novels for example, dragon was such an extreme powerhouse, it's a f*cking walking disaster that brings gravity to your story. There're enemies you can't kill, serve as a good parameter, and bring greatness to the story.I don't understand what this novel trying to become. Magic, gun, robot. Just how much convenience this story needs. Yeah, need that to patch some s*upid amount of logic error later.So yeah, it's a typical Japanese novel. With no added value compared to the others.