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The novel is badly spacedYou have to reach each sentence carefully because sometimes the next day or some important information is not mentioned as a separate line but as a continuation of the same paragraph.Also, There isn't much buildup before any event.like for eg: 'Qin Juran goes to sleep, she wakes up and now she's attending classes....' And it abruptly/quickly changes scenes too.Spoiler
Also I never understood what happened at the lover's hill. Ruan heard some boys footsteps then the wind brushed her ? She got hurt by falling then qin juran came from behind and she was standing but she called her saying 'Over here'? was she distracting those boys? idk
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