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DD1: It was excellent; the only thing to draw ire was a somewhat rushed conclusion. When you consider that it has many sequels it is not too big an issue.DD2: It was stable; if I can consider the prequel to be an action-packed adventure. This was an almost systematic explanation. Truthfully, few parts of this story really give the sense of suspense and intrigue, that the prequel does. Don't get me wrong it is still awesome it is just how do I say this near perfect. Perfection is a great goal and approaching it often produces monumental results. As a story aspect though it can mean bad things such as stale. Still for the most part a lot of noteworthy things were done we had alternate forms of strength and growth introduced.DD3: It started out good it is like the way readers started Mao Ni's Path Toward Heaven really excited and expectant... an emotion looking back now that was carried on too far. I almost felt like I was reading something like Fairy Tail by the time this one was over. It had emotions take bigger priority over built-up power. Which I felt really betrayed by what he had built up till now. It was wholesomely unstable and unsatisfying.DD4: This thing is perfect I must say it is like watching a master put together what he thinks his audience desires. That might be my biggest gripe here everything is so well done the MC is perfect. The support is perfect. The plot is not too lacking but you know as you read it rather than a feeling of praise I can only feel that this is like a story about passion with no emotion. It is like looking at the world's best put-together mural and thinking if you just lightly touch it all would become smoke, it is hollow.No, why. Seriously why did things turn out like this. Where is the spirit the heart in this thing it feels so dry and dead?I think that after this novel the author should consider switching genres. I Will read what he writes next, but I feel action is not his strong suit right now.