Geek Mob Mercenary Knows His Place (WN) Chapter 119 Discussion

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The premise and synopsis of the series actually hooked me up that I start reading it, but after chapter 24 I kinda lost interest on the novel, what makes me keep reading it because the chapter is short, after chapter 40 onward a single chapter will only contain like 500-550 word average so you'll finish reading it fast.

Battle scene is average at best, sometimes I don't know who is doing what and even don't understand what is the protagonist doing that earn him major contribution, even the author have said in chapter 30 that he's not good at writing battle chapter so I can excuse it.

What makes me lost interest is that there's really nothing interesting in the novel. The plot of the story can be summarized like this :

1. Protag accept new request.

2. Noble/Hero with bad behaviour badmouthing mc

3. Noble/Hero does something s*upid in battle.

4. MC earn contribution.

5. MC talk with some good looking woman, everyone sh*t on him that he should not talk with the woman, repeat point 1.

Having some conflict is fine, but when it keep going like this over and over again, even up to the newest chapter i've read. What makes this painful is that MC usually completed the request in just like 5-6 chapter average, i've lost count how many bad Noble/Hero that have been introduced that repeat their arrogant behaviour over and over again.

Oh and the constant pov switch, it's extremely annoying when the pov constantly switched, especially during the battle, making it harder to track what's happening in it.
 
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