Track Deviation Chapter Completed Discussion

  • Thread starter Bubupachu
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A decent short story that ends a bit abruptly and feels like it could be much longer. The author explores the story from the ml's perspective as well, which is always super interesting. However, I'm left wondering how the MC could be so oblivious. I'm sure their dynamic would probably annoy me to pieces if it was fleshed out in a longer story. So I guess it's a good thing this is so short!
 
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