70s Young Wife Teased! Black-bellied Officer Loses Control in Jealousy Chapter 109 Discussion

CurtneyOl · February 19,2025

This is a love story between the ML and his nation, strangers, and children.

He will always chose them before his wife. Misunderstandings and communication doesn't really exist between the couple. I am not sure I care much for either characters really. When the ML let's his feelings known, I just don't feel touched as a reader.

ArchProgenitor · February 20,2025

The storyline is good and one to follow. But the grammar is awful and really difficult to read along with in most sections; alot of spelling errors. I wonder with the excessive number of errors if English is a first language or not to the author.

70s Young Wife Teased! Black-bellied Officer Loses Control in Jealousy Chapter 109 Discussion

CurtneyOl

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