- #1
Plot of lost or stolen luck is interesting but the author doesn’t seem to know what world or century they are writing. Baby is stolen from hospital but everyone is super superstitious. No one uses the police or even requires people to have modern emphases on study or law. Not a speck of digital monitoring. People are afraid of scars, bugs and magic like in historical China but the heroine wants an electric bike and there’s a whole chapter about how safe they are. Pick a novelistic lane and stick with it!