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This is really sad. Not the plot, no the plot is very fluffy....I think. The translation quality is horrible. The pronouns are constantly being mixed up and I think I've even caught a few times where names have been changed. Sentences are choppy and the imagery could be better. I am fairly certain it is the translators fault, just because I don't think the author would have written it with alternating pronouns, but if I'm wrong I'm very sorry. And if I'm right, I'm just as sorry. The premise looked really good and I was excited about reading a new novel with a bunch of chapters stockpiled, but I can't even bear sticking it out past chapter 20. It took a lot of effort for me to make it this far.