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I think it could have been good if it was written better.I dont mind that MC is dense but even I have trouble being convinced any of the MLs actually have feelings for him. Half the time im doubting myself. That is not supposed to happen, especially not when you have the MLs physically stating who their preference is - im not supposed to be doubting whether they actually said so or not just because they seem so indifferent past the obvious physical attraction.Also im not too sure why Hu Ying is a character, I assumed it was to have a mean, green tea b*tch-type love rival that hated MC bec of their crush liking him, but HY also likes MC. Maybe the s**tty Mean type is popular now? I dont know but I did not like. I mean what is this? What even is this?Spoiler
Hu Ying says: "Holy f*ck it's so good, isn't it? It's so pink. Holy f*ck I love it. Is it a pink snow mountain? I love pink snowy mountains the most!"
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Hu Ying didn't hear the hostility in his words, and smiled and wiggled his bu*t a little.
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Hu Ying said, "Because the thing I work on most often at the gym is push-ups." Nonsense, it's obviously because doing push-ups shows off his arse!
[collapse]I dont even know what the Author was going with with this kind of character, It is literally the same personality as that one classmate no one likes. And the way he talks to everyone is so grating, constantly rude yet expects others to like him because hes pretty? HY honestly deserved to be beat up a good few times, and actually would have been if this was in real life.But ignoring my 1 pet peeve, the story is just kind of lame;Its half just descriptions of MCs lithe athletic body and the other half if vague mentions of MLs looking at MCs lithe athletic body.It could have been better, but the author didnt put as much effort into the world + character building or story telling as they should have.Read if you want a harem ig, but its not really worth it, especially not with the quality of MTL we have -on that note, MTL THIS YOURSELF. Tea Novels "translation" is an unedited MTL, and I dont know what they use, but even aggregator sites that have MTL features are higher quality