The T*ash Wants to Live Chapter dropped Discussion

I actually really enjoy this. MC is basically just a normal person, the world is interesting and the MLs are constantly drinking vinegar.

But I cant read this. It is impossible to understand, I dont know if its because of the translation or the way it was originally written but it is so difficult to understand what is happening.

who is speaking? Where are we? Whose pov is this? Who the f*ck knows because I sure dont!

Half the time we suddenly teleport scenes in the middle of conversations, and the other half the characters are stuck in a white void lmao. Not to even mention the conversations that are just dialogue, it reads even worse than a chat roleplay.

I would have loved to have read this, but its impossible without any actual actions or descriptors being present in the novel.