The Story of a Cat Beastkin Who Believes He is a Normal Cat and His Earnestly Persevering Mate Chapter Completed Discussion

For a short story, I think it's well developed plot wise. There's no real loose ends that made me question a part of the story. All major plot points were answered rather smoothly.

The biggest thing that made me give this 4 stars instead of 5 stars is how shallow the MC and ML are character development wise. For MC, you can excuse his spoiled behavior due to his confinement by the ML. And for ML, I guess the excuse for him is due to him 'instincts' for his mate. But overall they're both really shallow especially when you compare them to the side characters that have so much substance. The MC and ML should be the stars of the story but why do the side characters have more going for them?

But all in all, this is a good read to pass the time.