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Review at chapter 27 referring to it.Yup this chapter really needs you to turn of your brain here. Right so my opinion so far. The start is really captivating for what the title and synopsis imply. The issue comes with the realism fact. I don't mean to dismiss fiction but in taking this chapter into consideration, there would be too much chatter going on about the fact that a boy and one of the most outstanding girs in the class live together, and to add the fact that they are related which was previously unknown in most Japanese schools pr at least thats what normally portrayed in japanese literature. The other criticism I have is that protag-kun needs more personality cause ATM it seems like author is using him as a self insert or plot device with the way this is written. The thing is even other protagonists that are self inserts show more ersonality. I'm not saying there isn't but that the author hasn't written or shown much about him exactly. Everything we know about him is from his dialogue with other characters and some inner monologue, which in hindsight seems enough but there's something missing which I can't tell.Edit: Next few chaps are a bit more of the same thing but stick around there's a plot twist. Was actually pretty good!Edit 2: This is actually pretty engaging. I'm liking it and getting attached to some of the characters as it goes on. Some parts like chapter 27 as an example you might need to turn your brain off or ignore some things But I think the author is writing well he has his negatives, and his positives. I hope this story helps him improve and yea. I would love to see more reviews for this! I want to know what others think!