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This story would have been better as a R18. The author had the MC address true war crimes in a disturbingly childish way. It's like he started writing an bloody revenge story, but then remembered his target audience was middle schoolers.The gap between what's going on in the world and how the MC reacts to it is just strange. For instance, a women ordered her subordinate to torture a man who died after a week, so the MC uses his God like powers to make her think she wet the bed... If the story is for adults, that's fine. If the story is for kids, that's fine. But you need to pick one.