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it's not bad, there were some inconsistencies in the plot where probably the author forgot what they wrote, Spoiler
- for example he made mother chen be cruel and indifferent to her daughter in the beginning and then around the end (for their part) she was trying to please her.
- Also the ML & MC decided to start a relationship at some point and then we backtracked to spending time together and asking whether they want to be together.
Plus, the MC never revealed his origins, which according to ML's intelligence is not something he would have disregarded for long
[collapse]In addition, this is a ger genre, but it wasn't shown properly. Like, dude sees men carrying children and he is ok ? We don't see his reaction ? Only when he is about to give birth?Overall, I liked it well enough and because it didn't drag that much, it wasn't as tiring as some other novels I've been reading lately.