Transmigrated into Substitute Bride ‘Fu Lang’ Chapter Completed Discussion

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I'm usually not one for slice of life novels but there was enough of a plot in this one that made it very interesting.

I only have 2 concerns about this. 1 is that the MC comes off as 2-dimensional at times and there really isn't a lot of mention about him transmigrating. While I get that he's supposed to be a "go with the flow" me taking and be adaptable, his easy acceptance of going from a young master with status to a literal s*ave (s*ave contract included) in a matter of days really strikes me as off.

My second concern is that there are quite a few parts where it looks like text is missing. Translator comments say that the author may have posted the transition text in the comments, which is why when it goes to the next chapter/part the transition is weird. So just bare that in mind if you see scenes rapidly change into something else instead of continuing. And this is more of an observation, but the translation can be inconsistent at times. There are some chapters that read very MTL, whereas the follow up chapters are translated very well.
 
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