The Hero Took Everything from Me, So I Partied with the Hero’s Mother! Chapter 65 Discussion

You know there are those same I created an account just to review this story?

Hello, it's nice to meet you. I'm one of those people.

First off, I went into the story with High hopes because the concept seemed hilarious. However, let me make a long story short and safe stay the hell away.

If you want the long version, then I listed them below.

• • Subpar Writing

I made it all the way to chapter 60 before I dropped. To be honest, I was reading for the moment where the hero party found out that their mothers were getting boinked. The writer seemed to understand we wanted this moment, and kept finding little ways to push it further away so that we could keep reading. If I knew this was going to happen, I would have dropped it after 10 chapters.

• • Horrible Character Development

The characters seem to have no direction with their development. When you write a character to be strong, independent, and worthwhile, then take all of these things away from them, what are you left with? You're left with the characters in this story. The development that we start was going to be there in the beginning was nowhere to be found.

• • Soft @ss MC

If your best friend slept with someone who they thought you were interested in, showboat that to you, then kicked you out of your friend group, after taking advantage of you the whole time you were in the group, you will call that person a s***** friend, right? Apparently not this guy. While everybody told him that his friend was a s***** person who he should be getting revenge on, he kept making excuses as to why he didn't need revenge. According to him, his friends never did anything wrong. Oh, let's not talk about the man who sold his first love into s*avery. To get revenge on that person, he paid for him to have a new wife.

• • NO Story Structure

As many people have pointed out, the structure of the story has no bearing on what the story seem to be about at the beginning. It's like the only direction the Story had was a title. The author took the title and just wrote without planning.

Anyway, if you made it this far into the review, and I can assure you that you have been more entertained than you will be throughout the entirety of this story.

Save yourself the headache, the annoyance, and the overall frustration by staying away from this story.