- #1
Wow that was a bad read, it could be that the translator is using machine translations, but the characters repeat the same words over and over again that it almost feels like nagging.And man im starting to get tired of hearing the women call themselves old all the time, its just plain annoying and it quickly gets boring. (Not that it would stop the author for stubbornly spam it either way..) Spoiler
Later on he will be forced to have a harem of course, but here the author quickly show us that he/she is incapable of writing a harem novel, they all act, talk and express themselves in a nearly identical way so it is impossible to tell them apart.
It almost feels like the harem expanded because the author needed to boost his word counts or something. They all say the same thing and then repeats it four times so that all women get the chance to say what theyre thinking.
Oh, and they all degrade from being mature women into the same old young-girl-madly-in-love as we are used to. But we will still constantly get reminded that they are old.
[collapse]This was not worth my time reading to be honest.It got 2 stars due to a misclick instead of 1 btw..