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It's a decent, mildly entertaining story. I would only recommend it to fans of yuri.The writing is quite simple, and some sentences would be better if grouped into paragraphs. In addition, the translation tosses capitalized phrases left and right. The dialogue suffers from a typical problem in Japanese webnovels - it does not specify who is speaking - but this is a mild problem as the amount of characters are few. Readers might not mind all this, however; there are differences between the Japanese and English languages.At the beginning, the main character's reasoning is a bit forced and all the other characters easily accept the love between the two. Spoiler
The capture targets give up on the heroine and become fans of yuri. There is no discrimination against lesbians, which is a bit weird in a male-dominated society.
[collapse]The story, owing to its short length, suffers from lack of development in characters and worldbuilding.