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I really tried reading it, but I just can't.Spoiler warning or whatever.First thing first - I really hate when author thinks of an excuse to give our protagonist a bad situation.Like: "let's our protagonist sleep for a week, so other classmates have a head start". For what reason you do that? So readers will feel sympathy towards protagonist? This is just useless writing.or: "Haven't you heard? You need this and this to do that and that". Our protagonist was busy sleeping/working/fighting/studying/shitting/pissing/literally anything and couldn't be informed ahead of time or something. There are times when it works, but in my opinion it didn't work too well here. This type of writing creates unnecessary drama - although that's my opinion.A LOT OF WORDS. Now that sounds s*upid, but when you read a book or a novel from experienced author, it doesn't matter if you read one paragraph or two, you know the plot is advancing. Because you're reading it, you see it. But in this novel, there's this problem that author keep putting long explanations explaining various topics or situations - just about everything. These 15 chapters i've read, could be compiled to 7-8 chapters if you've just shortened the amount of unnecessary words the author is spewing.Also, every few chapters with our protagonist, there's a 1 chapter from focusing on other classmates (mainly our hero and saint). I have to say, it's a great idea in my opinion, but it just doesn't fit here. Our story is about beta male who's happy when he happened to find a lunchbox, so he can use it to mislead monsters. Some time later we see a chad male who's strong enough to kill with wooden sword, traveling with his cute sister. And then back to the reality. I really dislike it. I'm not here for inferiority fetish.Overall, up to 15 chapter it is a utter garbage (no, I wouldn't write anything better) and honestly I wouldn't try again in the future. It's really hard to find a good fantasy novel to read huh.sorry for mistakes here and there.