Elqueeness Chapter 30 Discussion

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Points that should be noted:

- The MC is a beta (he takes sh*t from everyone and doesn't really do anything about it)

- The summoning aspect of this story is non-existent. After the initial summoning, it never happened again.

- The MC never actually uses his abilitys in a significant way. Because of the situation that he's in it makes impossible for him to be of any actual use. (For 30 chapters he doesn't take part in fights and is unable to freely use his abilitys)

- Although there are hints of some kind of gender bender, he seems to dispise the fact that he looks like a girl and the jokes created by being mistaken for a girl aren't all that funny.

- The MC is not the most intelligent thing in the world. Although hes not an idiot, he's not all that smart either.

- Training is not a focus in this book and as such I never really had any confidence in the MC actions. How do I feel confident in a MC that never fights.

- The MC never really thinks for himself, with his friend, another spirit, always there telling him what to do. "Don't do that", "yes you are allowed to say that", "no you are not allowed to remember being human", "You have to be above everyone else and cannot have sympathy for others"...

- Did I already say how useless he is?

1.5/5 for character score (for the reasons stated above)

3/5 for quality of writing (it sometimes changes from first to third person and chaper breaks aren't separate making it hard to understand who's talking)

4/5 for trying to be unique in the oversaturated "travel to another world" genre.

3/5 for world building (political). The description of the world isn't bad, but it's definitely not going to win medals.

3.5/5 for world building (magical). Although we get a basic idea of the different magic types it was never really expanded apon.

Final conclusion: the beginning is fun but it slowly becomes more and more boring as time goes on. Read if you don't intend to finish the book till the end.
 
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