Elqueeness Chapter 22 Discussion

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The beginning was quite interesting, after all there are rarely any novels that have an MC as an elemental spirit, especially a King. I only rate this 2.5/5 though. The MC is way too whiny and s*upid for my taste. He doesn't even use his powers that much, which is just a waste. And just as one of the reviewers said, he really is quite a beta. As well as a pushover, like dude's just like a copy paste of a Japanese beta protagonist. He is also pretty s*upid, he was warned in advance but he pretty much just ignores the warning causing him to be trapped.

The story is kind of sexist too and there is another thing that just made me want to stop reading.

Spoiler

There's this 17 year old girl who was about to be gang r*ped (heck, they even bound her and silenced her with a spell) but the MC and his friends just hung the perpetrators on the trees for a night then let them go. Also, that 17 years old girl, is in love and chasing after an almost 30 years old man, who by the way raised her since she was 9 years old, and he likes her too, yuck.

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The translation has a lot of grammatical errors and typos. The idea of the story is great really but I just can't continue reading this.

Many people like this but it's just not my cup of tea.
 
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