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Poorly written and boring.In this 17 chapters barely anything happens. It is just MC living his (boring) life. He and ML met two really short times, so no relationship development here (in universe reason is that they shouldn't meet before weddind, but then maybe pace it differently?). For some reason ML seems already into MC. Like, when they meet for the first time, MC gave ML a letter and ML was disappointed that it is not a love letter. Him expecting a love letter/confession becomes a running joke, and I guess the author was going for "aloof and strong guy wants attention from his waifu", but forgot to show us what type of person he actually is. So ML is as interesting as a cardboard cutout.The last drop that made me drop this snorefest: MC's mom died in a sudden death. MC suspected that she was mu*dered by his stepmom. MC tried to investigate, but met a dead end and had to give up. A couple of days prior the wedding he was taking a walk in a garden and happened to overhear a maid taking to someone about this mu*der. And not just talking, she confessed that she did it and had evidence. A confession of a mu*der that happened 10 years prior. Right in front of MC. Who was just casually strolling in a garden. Is it lazy writing, or is it lazy writing?MC is so pathetic that he couldn't avenge his mother without deus ex machina.Add to that a brainless cannon fodder of antagonist, and you have a truly not enjouable experience.