Greetings, Automata Maid Chapter 45 Discussion

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It feel worst than it is because the first arc is so good at making the world feel not too much tokein/DnD-ripoff like average typical japanese fantasy with help of storytelling technique called mystery box.

mystery box worked by omission of informations from reader. It's perfect for a story with planned plot because internal consistancy is very impotent. Ending must come first before plot demanded to open the box because it's near impossible satified such high exspectation of consumers at that point.

That's why it's bad for long unplanned fiction story such as this webnovel because it will go suck fast.
 
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